Hi, I'm making a fan movie script of what I would've liked to have seen in the Owls of Ga'hoole movies. Here's some ideas I had that I'd like your opinions on:
We meet Ruby and Primrose early, at the end of the first film though Primrose had fainted upon escaping the forest fire off screen.
We learn what happened with Gylfie's family and Digger's brother, the one that wasn't eaten, it's a small but important moment that haunts the two for a majority of the second film and part of a much later film.
The reason Finny gets upset, doesn't faint, at the word Ga'hoole is because the word was enchanted to be a sort of warning to those with malicious intent that they better back off. The scene will also foreshadow that Hortense is just acting moonblinked.
Twilight's ability to make his enemy go yeep is revealed to be a power, hence why it works on so many of their enemies.
Coryn no longer exists, his roll as king is given to the OG band members after Peli leads them to the ember, the first third of that film is spent on Peli and Soren, then she gets word that a member of her group "The Guardians of the Ember" betrayed them to the Pure Ones so she's like, "Let's get the ember." Then the last couple minutes of the film has Soren looking at their eggs and promising to give them the life he and his sister never had. Of course we'll have to forgoe the eclipse thing...unless we do different celestial events for each of the four band members.
The mirror lake is revealed to be a place of torture because it shows owls the thing they most desire and the prisoners of the lake are taken in and out as a means of torture. Stryga uses the ember to do something similar to Soren and the others end up having to pull him out of the spell.
And lastly, because I remember that someone brought this up, Ga'hoole is revealed to be keeping their knowledge hidden until they take care of St. Augie's and the Pure Ones.